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Dear Catie,

I was shopping at the mall one day and I thought I saw you. It’s kind of wierd, I guess, seeing you after so long. I had to stop. I stared for awhile, but I couldn’t get up the courage to talk to you. Because I knew it wasn’t you. But I just hoped it was. I couldn’t see your face too well, but you looked exactly the same. Your hair and your height and your clothes. All exactly the same. You were dressed in that purple shirt you loved and that good old pair of tattered jeans with the paint splotches. The jeans your Mom gave to me. The jeans I was wearing at that moment in time. My heart really just stopped when I saw you. I wanted to smile and jump for joy. And all those bad feelings went away, but only for a moment. Because I remembered that you were dead. And when I looked closer at you, I realized that it wasn’t you. It was just some girl who looked a little like you. There were no splotches of paint on her jeans, and her hair was the wrong color. And she was taller than you were. And there was really only a little bit of resemblance between you two. I really miss you, Catie. I wanted to let you know about the time I thought I saw you again.

Love,
Ally
©2007-2010 ~bunnysquirrel8
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Author's Comments

This is just a little letter from a friend to her deceased friend whose death she really has not gotten over.

(This is fictional, by the way)

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:icontina-bobina:
That was a touching letter...Thanks for sharing

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"Love is a fruit in season at all times, and within reach of every hand." - Mother Teresa

~~Tina Bo-Bina
:iconzippythewolf:
so sad, strange, and i like it. its just sad that some people have to do that to remeber a lost one is gone. good job :)

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:iconbunnysquirrel8:
You do know that it is fictional, right?

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If you could build a house on a trampoline, that would suit me fine.
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:icontina-bobina:
Yeah I knew it was fictional, but you shared your fictional story with us and it was cool :)

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"Love is a fruit in season at all times, and within reach of every hand." - Mother Teresa

~~Tina Bo-Bina
:iconbunnysquirrel8:
Oh, sorry, your comment sounded like you thought it was real... okay..

Thanks!

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If you could build a house on a trampoline, that would suit me fine.
-Alan Rickman

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